Friday, December 30, 2005

Cloudy

Dense cloud cover for the last
week
The sun has forsaken
us
The only color is
Lead
Someone hand me an acetylene
torch
I'm going to cut the roof off this
bitch

14 comments:

Kelly Coyle said...

You an Am have such different styles. Sartre and de Beauvoir, except more like Bukowski, and, I don't know, Marianne Moore.

David Oppegaard said...

Funny, the first time I read Bukowski I thought to myself, "hey, this guy writes poetry like I would, if I wrote poetry." Not to say we have the same views, sensabilties, etc...

I hadn't read any of Viney's poetry before I invited her to start this blog with me, but I could tell by her prose writing that we'd compliment each other in a good way. She'd be the beauty to my beast, if you will.

David Oppegaard said...

I'm still fishing around for some other poet friends to sporadically post poems, too. I imagined this blog as a collective, a sort of co-op against some of the crap they publish in the New Yorker with a straight face.

Kelly Coyle said...

Do poets even have friends? I thought they just had people close who didn't really understand them.

Of course, you're a poet now. What's it like?

David Oppegaard said...

Hmmm. You're right. Suddenly no one really "gets" me.

No. Wait. My whole freakish existence has been like that. Nevermind.

Kelly Coyle said...

Maybe you were a poet and didn't know it.

Amethyst Vineyard said...

Being a poet is like being that kid in school who had to wear a strap on his glasses; you just sort of stumble through life, occasionally awakening from your lush inner world to look around you, blinking, wondering what's so funny and why is everyone looking at you and laughing.

Kelly Coyle said...

Hey, wait. Now that's me.

Amethyst Vineyard said...

Kelly, you have the heart of a poet. And the unmistakable air of a kid with strap-on glasses.

JimiPhoenix said...

Wow, poets sound like reclusive versions of me who haven't latched on to their superiority complex yet!

Dave, I really like your poetic rhythm. Within the next couple of weeks I'm going to draw my vision of the yodeling tornadoe and send it to you guys (and girls, Am, but I group girls with guys whenever I say "you guys", as most people should).

JimiPhoenix said...

Don't you hate spelling errors/typos where you can't fix them?

David Oppegaard said...

Don't worry about spelling, Jimi. When I blog I spell badly...

Have you ever seen a tornado in person? Viney lives in tornado alley, and here in MN, especially flat South Central MN where I grew up, we get them every summer. I saw one once at a distance, and that was enough for me. It was huge, a black wall of darkness that ravaged the town of St. Peter, MN.

Amethyst Vineyard said...

I have never seen a tornado, something for which I am profoundly grateful.
Actually, Mobile is not too bad for the twisters; where I grew up, in Jasper, Alabama, is ripped to shit by them almost monthly. Mobile just has mind-wrenching hurricanes. I really didn't think anything could be as scary as a tornado, but hurricanes are almost it.

JimiPhoenix said...

I've had a nightmare about a tornado once. It wasn't pleasant, so I imagine the real thing would scare the bejesus out of me. Wait. I don't have any bejesus in me anyway ^_^;;;